Sunday, January 27, 2019

Jane Heir Q&A

What inspired you to write this book?
Jane Eyre is one of my all-time favorite novels! Jane has been a role model to me since I “met” her in 5th grade, so I wanted to retell the story for the women of the 21st-century—there’s still a lot we can learn from a person like her.

Why do you follow the original so closely, even keeping similar lines?
The above answer applies very much! Also, my adaptation is like the novel form of Response Poetry (here's one I wrote if you're curious!). Jane Eyre is one of the most well-known heroines in the western canon, and I wanted to explore how our position as women has advanced as well as how it remains the same. Hence, “heir” as her last name! I wrote the modern version I want to read: the one I think Charlotte Brontë would have written—with her sensibilities, her heart, her concerns—if she lived in our day and age.

Why does it take 11 chapters for the romance to start?!
Like the original, my adaptation is also a bildungsroman—a coming-of-age story. And our past can impact relationships, romantic and otherwise. Charlotte Brontë wrote a rich, thoughtful romance and that was important to me, too, so I faithfully re-imagined the story chapter by beloved chapter! If you think that’s dung 💩 (Ha! Get it?!), by all means skip to chapter 12, lol!

What gave you the idea to make Rochester a rap star?
Because I wanted this story to be relatively realistic, I had to figure out what the modern equivalent of Bertha is—in the same situation nowadays (spoiler alert!), Rochester could simply divorce her, so there goes that essential conflict! So I thought about what Bertha symbolizes: financial and social capital and went from there. (Don’t want to spoil anything more!)

Why did you change his name? 
Rochester sounded too antiquated, and Richmond was perfect with “rich” and “monde” (French for “world”, although it comes from “hill,” I later learned) and retains some of the most dominant sounds!

The Gothic was integral to the original—why not in yours? Yeah, I sacrificed it to realism. We have so much darkness to deal with in our lives—and that’s what haunts Richmond and Jane in my version.

If you’re a Christian writer, why do you include profanity and somewhat explicit content? It’s important to me to portray our society and culture realistically—people curse and behave questionably or in ways they shouldn’t, and literature allows us to “safely“ consider these issues. I carefully reflect on each instance where potentially offensive/upsetting content is included; it’s not gratuitous but thought-provoking. Like Flannery O’Connor, the great Catholic writer whose work was also considered very dark, said, “The basis of art is truth, both in matter and in mode.”

If Richmond is a rap star, why doesn’t he talk like one? Rap artists are wordsmiths, so I’m sure most speak in a variety of registers, code switching based on the audience/context/etc. and probably have more expansive vocabularies than most people, so Mr. Richmond speaks in pretty “standard” English, sometimes throwing in some more “elevated” verbage, when he’s talking to Jane since she’s nerdy. Not sure how rap artists are expected to speak when not rapping, but I avoid stereotyping—that’s also why I don’t caricaturize like Bronte  (which she did to critique religious hypocrisy as well as classism and a very effective tool to do so; our society and culture is much more diverse, and we stereotype others too much as it is, so I made all characters as 3 dimensional as possible, like real people are!).  

Monday, June 11, 2012


Pity the Beautiful by Dana Gioia
Pity the beautiful, 
the dolls, and the dishes,
the babes with big daddies
granting their wishes.

Pity the pretty boys,
the hunks, and Apollos,
the golden lads whom
success always follows.

The hotties, the knock-outs,
the tens out of ten,
the drop-dead gorgeous,
the great leading men.

Pity the faded,
the bloated, the blowsy,
the paunchy Adonis
whose luck’s gone lousy.

Pity the gods,
no longer divine.
Pity the night
the stars lose their shine.


Response Poem by Veronica  C
Pity the People Who
Pity the beautiful
Because summer fades?
At least they were warm.
At least they shone.

(Should the young be pitied their youth?)

Pity beauty
Because it will break—
Like dolls and dishes—
Like waiting wishes?

Pity the pretty
Who glow with Apollo
Whom success follows—
Gorgeous, if cold, gold?

No, pity the Adonis
Gored by the boar
Whose Beauty is nothing more
Than the gods—

That is the reason:
Pity beauty only
If it’s Treason
To Goodness and Truth.

And pity the ugly
Who waste wishes
on beauty.

And pity the plain
Whose own faces
Cause shame.

Pity those
Who  hide because
Their beauty does.

Pity they
Who long for beauty’s
Illusory claim.

But more,
Pity the people—
Pretty, ugly or plain—

Who let beauty reign
So high
In their eyes and hearts.

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Poetry Priority

business?
What is business to Poetry?

It is bitter metal to Sweet Earth.
sickly fluorescence to Blazing Sun.

business? business?! That's what you do in the bathroom;
it should take, like, two minutes.

Poetry is the soul speaking!
Poetry is the blood breathing!

And you let business, business, take priority.

Then you have no Business with Poetry.

Orange Acid

Lust is feeling like Orange juice
viscous acid Throat
sticky with Thirst

the rind of Lips
open to the jewel Tongue
and the Stomach pulp
burns the heart

Orange juice drips down the Chin
seeping into the Skin
Orange with Want
peels Eyes in surprise

delicious
We gulp you
until we’re sick

The stars have broken

The stars have broken
every wish.

Every desire distant.
Every desire dark.

each spark
seen
seen only.
Never touched, never felt.

Imagined fire
conjured every-one
only to show that
all is blackness.

The stars have broken
every wish.

Heavy Universe

Heavy universe
Upon my soul
Heavy, heavy
It heaves
When will it leave?
Microwave me red
Radio the ground back
Make the dark matter

i am no
Atlas

When will we
collapse

Without Cover

A book without cover
Known by what is Written—

not binding;
no hiding—
but

Ready to Be Read